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Viviart
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PostSubject: Ask   Fri Dec 21, 2007 6:01 am

I wrote this pretty quickly one night in November:

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Ask the rays of the golden star up above
if there's anything more precious than you.
What lack of luster regained by your presence shimmers itself,
a worth beyond measure.

Ask the depths of the dark sea
if there's anything more mysterious than you.
Dark blue eyes steady on your placid face,
who could guess what torrents lay beneath?

Ask the green blades of the long fields
if there's anything more beautiful than you.
Flowers upon flowers they bear but yet,
could their beauty match yours?

Ask the soft shadows of the trees
if there's anything more patient than you.
Time shifts brings new changes
but you remain with your secret smiles.

Ask me finally
if there's anything who loves you more than me.
Stay still with me in your regards,
for how could I be without you to guide me?
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PostSubject: Re: Ask   Tue Jan 01, 2008 7:28 am

that's nice - do you enjoy writing poetry vivi?
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PostSubject: Re: Ask   Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:42 am

I only enjoy writing poety when they come out nice, otherwise, I get frustrated and don't write for a while. But when inspiration hits, I have to write or otherwise I can't sleep.
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